Got The Point by Brittany

Please comment & vote on this poem!! I want to know if I'm any good. Thanks you guys!!



I live my life to the fullest
Party every chance I get
Friday night's the spot is the place
I hit, decked out, chest out
Me & my girls roll up in the club
like we own the world
You should see the eyes on me
Dress fittin' like a prize on me
High split, fellas get the rise on me
Just from the looks of it, I must
say, you're bound to get hooked
on it if you play
Bring sand to the beach
Keep you on a leash
I know how thirsty these chicks
could be, scheming and plotting on you like me
I'm telling you its like gold, hard
to let go, harder to hold
I'll dance with you slowly to a
hip hop joint & only stop when I'm
positive
You got the point?